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The Clock Stops Ticking With Your Love.

The sun doesn’t have to go down,
I’m willing to stay in your arms forever,
Wait until our deaths come around,
As long as we pass on together.

It’s not nine at night, it’s nine in the afternoon.
But in my eyes, time only represents how much I’ll spend with you,
Don’t worry, I’m not leaving you any time soon
Because our love, our laughter, our wonder, is completely, utterly true.

We can remain in this room,
Thinking of our futures, soon to come
Your soft, endless blue eyes the size of the moon
And we won’t leave until we’re certain our lives are done.

Hold me like no one before,
Kiss me like love itself,
There’s something about you that makes me see something more
Just hold me, through sickness and through health.

But night rolls in,
And our bliss loses its meaningful touch
Our rational thoughts finally start to  begin
And we think that maybe we’ve had enough.

The time is relentless, and our feelings remain strong
The clock has stopped our emotions for now, but they’ll come back soon
Our true love is as great as the day is long,
Especially when nine at night is really nine in the afternoon.
©2008-2009 ~PanicxFOBx4Everx
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:

Author's Comments

Yeah, this is an entry for a contest. Hope you like it.

And stay tuned for more PGMH and LAK.

Goes to the lyrics nine in the afternoon by panic at the disco.

Thanks for reading! :heart:

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:iconkittycat1805:
This is sooo good. You're really good at rhyming, you know. :aww:

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:iconnarutoaddict765:
i like it XD. btw i added you for my poem contest XD

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:iconprettyoddmcrmy:
WOW...this is great

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"to the end em, :glomp: to the end"

MCR saved my life:heart:, and PATD added some excitement to it :boogie:
:iconinkyster:
wow...that is so awesome! your poems get me thinking!

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My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
Hehe thanks! I just use words that are easy to rhyme :D

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:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
OKay, thanks! I have to get to writing that. Whens the deadline?

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Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
Awww...thanks! Glad you liked it. :D

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Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
Yay! Im glad they get you thinking. No ones ever said that to me before, and Ive always been hoping someone would! I just want my writing to inspire people to think outside the box, to wonder beyond what's imaginable. Makes sense, I hope?

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Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconinkyster:
it does make sense and yes your poems do inspire me!

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ONE DAY I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MWAHAHAHA... Hey is that a cookie?! GIVE ME THE COOKIE!
My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!

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