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She's Bleeding, Bleeding. by ~PanicxFOBx4Everx:iconPanicxFOBx4Everx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


She’s Bleeding, She’s Bleeding.

Verse 1-
Somebody hide her away.
She’s dying, dying.
Somebody take her out.
She’s lying, lying.
This is the last thing I wanted.
Watching her do this is just torture.
Please, someone hide her.
She’s crying now.
She’s dying now.
And I don’t know how to stop it.
[She blames it on herself.]

Chorus-
Lost all intelligence. Turned into arrogance.
She didn’t know what else to do.
Shut her eyes and told herself lies.
And now she’s helpless without you.
She’s only bleeding. But she’s worth keeping.
Anyway. [Anyway.]
Her ignorance is my pain.

Verse 2-
Everybody, look away.
She’s just choking, choking.
Everybody, she’s okay.
She’s just broken, broken.
Leave her to herself, to lie there and dream.
I just need to sew back the seams of who she used to be.
Please, everybody look away.
She’s choking now.
She’s broken now.
And I don’t know how to fix things.
[Razorblade to brazen skin.]

Bridge-
Somebody, call a doctor.
She’s bleeding, she’s bleeding.
Someone, call a doctor.
She’s bleeding.
Bleeding.


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©2008-2009 ~PanicxFOBx4Everx
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Author's Comments

New song, haha. I've been writing a lot more of these lately, but I'm only posting the ones that I think are good enough. ^.^

Oh, and I've tried something new. Anything in the brackets- [ and ] if you didnt know- is in screamo. I really wanted to inccorperate something like that in it, so yeah. That's screamo, lol.

And I was listening to Flyleaf and Evanescence while I wrote this. If anything, this is the most 'emo' song Ive written, but hey, I like it. ;)

Tell me what you think?

Thank you!!
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~psychopse Oct 11, 2008, 8:51:45 AM
Love it.

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*Heroisagirl Oct 11, 2008, 9:29:42 AM
Wow, I like it. I like the dark imagry as it really does give a sense of pain of the person in the song. I also like the idea of it being a screamo song because sometimes lyrics need to be screamed to emphasise the emotions of a song. Oh and I also love Evanescence and Flyleaf (although sadly Flyleaf isn't as well known over here). If I could sing, I would totally scream like Lacey. :D

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~Kittycat1805 Oct 11, 2008, 11:26:01 AM
Oooh, dark. Well I'll give this a shot, maybe not tonight. Maybe I'll say the screamo parts. Don't think I've done it before.

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~PanicxFOBx4Everx Oct 11, 2008, 12:04:07 PM
Haha, Im not very good at the screamo parts myself. Terrible, actually. ^.^

Thank you! And I cant wait! =]

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~PanicxFOBx4Everx Oct 11, 2008, 12:06:50 PM
Aww, thank you!! I was really proud of the way this song made me feel when I finished it. ^.^

I wish I could scream like she does! I evny her, erally. And I love her voice as well. I really do wish I could sing. >.<

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Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
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~PanicxFOBx4Everx Oct 11, 2008, 12:07:11 PM
Thank you so much. :hug:

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Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
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~Kittycat1805 Oct 11, 2008, 12:20:38 PM
Erm, just wait til you hear the other ones first. ^^;

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~psychopse Oct 11, 2008, 12:53:27 PM
No problem.
Keep writing girl! you're on a roll!!

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NO good luck goes UNPAID.

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*moony-wentz Oct 11, 2008, 9:00:51 PM
I just need to sew back the seams of who she used to be.

made me shiver.... in a good way of course. ^^

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