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You Haven't Changed Bit. by ~PanicxFOBx4Everx:iconPanicxFOBx4Everx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Song


Verse 1-
Don't tell me you're sorry
Because I know you're not. Don't pretend.
I can see through that fake apology
And it's my turn to get the last laugh.
Looks like this love story just came to an end.

Chorus-
I watched our romance crash and burn,
And not gracefully, I might add.
I think there' something we both need to learn here,
And it's that liars get nowhere.
All they get is their fair share of misery.
I hope you're prepared.

Verse 2-
Did you really think I wouldn't realize
The insincerity behind those vacant eyes?
Well, you though wrong, Dear.
I'm going to tell you something, and there is no repeating.
So I'll say it loud and clear.

Chorus

Bridge-
How are you, so long after you lied?
Have you forgotten all those tears I cried?
Oh, no, I don't think so.
You haven't changed a bit.
©2008-2009 ~PanicxFOBx4Everx
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:

Author's Comments

This would be decent song number two. Again, no melody. If youve got one and have a way of getting it on the internet, be sure to tell me.

Both this one and my last one seem kind of angry. Ive got a good feeling that the next one will have to do with love? Not hate so much.

Tell me what you think? It would help a lot...

Thanks for even taking the time to loo, though.

And got any good band name suggestions? Ive got a few but Id like to hear what youve got.

:hug:

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~PrettyOddApplesauce Sep 16, 2008, 4:02:37 PM
first comment! haahha

you and your angry songs. but i like them =)

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To the end michelle :hug:
:iconinkyster:
~Inkyster Sep 16, 2008, 4:42:53 PM
Once again I think it'll be a #1 hit. ^^

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ONE DAY I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MWAHAHAHA... Hey is that a cookie?! GIVE ME THE COOKIE!
My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
~PanicxFOBx4Everx Sep 16, 2008, 5:24:26 PM
Haha, 2 Number 1s in a row!! Thats pretty generous of you to say. ^.^

--
Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconprettyoddmcrmy:
~PrettyOddMCRmy Sep 17, 2008, 5:46:17 AM
:aww: :hug:

next a love song huh? oooooooo

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"to the end EM :glomp: to the end..."

"MCR saved my life :heart:, but PATD added excitement to it ":boogie:
:iconinkyster:
~Inkyster Sep 17, 2008, 11:27:57 AM
XD Tis true. They will be #1's ^^

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ONE DAY I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD! MWAHAHAHA... Hey is that a cookie?! GIVE ME THE COOKIE!
My art is a blast un!
Envy is better than Edward....in his DREAMS!!!
:iconkittycat1805:
~Kittycat1805 Sep 17, 2008, 2:04:02 PM
Kewl! <- Irish spelling of "cool". Hehe. I wish.

Seriously though, you're a really good lyricist. & I'm not just saying that because I like you. :aww:

I'll have to work on a tune for this one too then, I suppose. *sigh* I need to let my voice recover first. Then it's back to business!

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:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
~PanicxFOBx4Everx Sep 17, 2008, 2:37:07 PM
Youre like my hero, Cat. =] I cant think of any tunes for anything. Its terrible.

And thank you so much!! I was hoping someone would say that. I hate when people dont tell the truth because they like me. Like, I know you like me, so Ill forgive you if youre harsh? Thats what I think.

And of course, of course, wait until your voice gets better. :hug:

--
Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
~PanicxFOBx4Everx Sep 17, 2008, 2:37:30 PM
Thats right!! Love songs are harder for me though, so...;)

--
Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
:iconpanicxfobx4everx:
~PanicxFOBx4Everx Sep 17, 2008, 2:37:42 PM
:glomp:

--
Don\\\'t you know who I think I am?

Question: What\\\'s your favorite cartoon character?
Ryan: Aladdin, \\\'cuz he\\\'s fuckin\\\' awesome!

BEST CLUB EVER.
[link]

I am Ryan Ross in dA\'s Celebrity Crew!!! Yay
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